英语好的请进!我实在是看不出文章里有什么错的地方请大家帮忙!

英语好的请进!我实在是看不出文章里有什么错的地方请大家帮忙!
在这篇文章中找错,好的话,我加30分!
Jim Green,is our English teacher,has been in
China for more than two years.He has been to many
Interesting places in Beijing,and he has not yet
Been to many other parts of China.Last week he
Goes to Mout Emei in Sichuan Province with his
Family.Many people like travel by air,but
Jim family think that travelling by train is
The best.It is much cheap and far more enjoyable
Than a rushed trip by air.He had a wonderful
Train ride to Chengdu after they went on to Mount
Emei by bus.
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i03e3w 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

井然沐梓 花朵

共回答了27个问题采纳率:92.6% 举报

1.第一行去掉is
2.第二行been 变成gone
3.第三行and 变成but
4.没错貌似..^^
5.第五行goes 变成went
6.第六行like traveling
7.第七行Jim's family
8.第八行 much cheaper
9.They had
10.第十行去掉on

1年前

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xiaoxiang979 幼苗

共回答了832个问题 举报

Jim Green, who is our English teacher, has been in
China for more than two years. He has went to many
Interesting places in Beijing, but he has not yet
Been to many ...

1年前

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惊异玫瑰 幼苗

共回答了758个问题 举报

1.is our Englishi teacher (去掉is)(做同位语)
2.and he hasn't yet改成but he hasn't yet (上下文的逻辑为转折关系)
3.many other parts改成any other parts (他还没有去过除北京之外的任何地方。)
4.goes to 改成 went to (过去时)
5. travel...

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