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Don't be afraid of making mistakes（ ,）so we should speak bravely.(Listening) to Chinese more and (reading) more will also help us.When we have time,we'd better listen to Chinese programs (,)and (learning) to sing Chinese songs is also a good idea.Believe" (Practice) makes (perfect)",so we should practice more.

Don't be afraid of making mistakes, and don't be shy of speaking. Listening to Chinese more and reading more books will also help us. When there is spare time, listen to Chinese programs and learn to sing Chinese songs, these are also good ideas. Believe in " Practice makes perfect", so practice more.