As far as I am concerned,I like traditional shopping.
As far as I am concerned,I like traditional shopping.
Because it is secure and we can check the qualing of the products.It can not be deny that onling shopping is cheaper and truly global ,but we can not actually see the products.But for security reasons,I like tradional shopping.And we can personal relationship with shopkeeper.Anyway,I love tradiional shopping .After all ,traditional shopping is the mainstream ,there exists a long history.看看哪里有错误!
Because it is secure and we can check the qualing of the products.It can not be deny that onling shopping is cheaper and truly global ,but we can not actually see the products.But for security reasons,I like tradional shopping.And we can personal relationship with shopkeeper.Anyway,I love tradiional shopping .After all ,traditional shopping is the mainstream ,there exists a long history.看看哪里有错误!
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As far as I am concerned, I like traditional shopping, because it is secure and we can check the quality of the products.It can not be denied that onling shopping is cheaper and truly global , but we can not actually see the products. So due to security reasons,I like tradional shopping.
And we can build personal relationship with shopkeeper. Anyway, I love tradiional shopping .After all ,traditional shopping is the mainstream ,which has existed for a long history.
把你作文中的语法错误修改了.但是文中依然有一些语意重复的地方.你应该整理好思路再写.
And we can build personal relationship with shopkeeper. Anyway, I love tradiional shopping .After all ,traditional shopping is the mainstream ,which has existed for a long history.
把你作文中的语法错误修改了.但是文中依然有一些语意重复的地方.你应该整理好思路再写.
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