there is a new market near our ``````````是一篇短文改错,总共有十个错误,急

there is a new market near our ``````````是一篇短文改错,总共有十个错误,急
There is a new market near our house.My mother often goes to buy that we need for our meals .But I have never been there before.Yesterday I went to the market with my mother.There were such many people that we could hardly make our ways through the crowds.There were all kinds of vegetables,fishes and fruit in everywhere .People were talking about the goods and the prices.the sellers'shouts could heard now and then.I remembered that the day after I had asked Mother to buy some fresh fish.Most of fish there were frzoen,but we had not much trouble find some fresh fish at the other part of the market .My mother bought what she wanted it.It was my first time to go to the market ,and I was deeply impressed by what I saw in the market.
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二分之一阳光 幼苗

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改正在括号处标出,总共十处错误!
There is a new market near our house.My mother often goes to buy 【what】 we need for our meals.But I have never been there before.Yesterday I went to the market with my mother.There were【so】 many people that we could hardly make our 【way】 through the 【crowd】.There were all kinds of vegetables,fishes and fruit 【去掉in】 everywhere.People were talking about the goods and the prices.The sellers' shouts could 【加入be】 heard now and then.I remembered that the day【before】 I had asked Mother to buy some fresh fish.Most of fish there were frzoen,but we had 【no】 much trouble 【finding】 some fresh fish at the other part of the market.My mother bought what she wanted 【去掉it】.It was my first time to go to the market,and I was deeply impressed by what I saw in the market.

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we555 幼苗

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There were such many people that we could hardly make our ways through the crowds中such改成so
.the sellers'shouts could heard now and then中heard改成hear
Most of fish there were frzoen中去掉there
M...

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scosco 幼苗

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My mother often goes to buy that we need for our meals .
1.that 改为 what
There were such many people that we could hardly make our ways through the crowds.
2.such改为so
3.make our ways改为m...

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得一贫 幼苗

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There is a new market near our house.My mother often goes to buy that we need for our meals .But I have never been there before. Yesterday I went to the market with my mother.There were such many peop...

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