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I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close that it seemed touchable. I had ever seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kind of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointing and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home!
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I joined Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, but I was wrong. The climb hurt my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when ...

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I joined in the Bird Watching class trip last weekend.
I thought it would be a good place to rest, but I was wrong. I hurt my legs during climbing and they ached.
P.E. was easily compared to...

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