有语法错误吗My ambition is to become a scientist.As a child,I had

有语法错误吗My ambition is to become a scientist.As a child,I had many dreams,but becoming scientist is the most thing I want to be.
I learned a lot through books and Internet,wishing to get much knowledge on the science.I think scientist has more influence on the society.If I can be a scientist,I can contribute to my motherland.The goal of our life is to do more for the harmony happiness of the society.I hope my ambition and dream can come true.I am willing to study hard and become a scientist in the future.
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6688pp 幼苗

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As a child是“作为一个孩子”,我觉得你的意思是"当我还是个孩子时候",when I was a child;
but becoming scientist is the most thing I want to be.改为but becoming a scientist was my biggest dream.更通顺些;
I learned a lot through books and (the) Internet
I think (a) scientist has more influence on the society.
The goal of our life is to do more for the harmony happiness of the society这句中harmony 是名词,不知道你为什么还在后面加上happiness,应该去掉吧
暂时就看出这些

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My ambition is to become a scientist. As a child, I had many dreams, but becoming scientist is the most thing I want to be.
I learned a lot(s) through books and Internet,wishing to get much kno...

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