看看我写的演讲稿有没有语法错误之类的

看看我写的演讲稿有没有语法错误之类的
Today was my turn to speech ,I'm a little nervous.
I prepared for a long time but didn't even know this talk about what.
But the game is most people's favorite subject of,especially the boys.
well,what's Your favorite game Maybe someone will say DNF or CF
They are online games ,and many students love to play them very much.
and It will spend too much money and time.Even some students spend the whole weekend time to play .Games Led to their homework doesn't have time to do,So they go to school to copy other classmates homework
Then their grades will declines.
So I want to tell everybody:It is benefitful to your mind to play game to a certain extent,but bad to you if you get addicted to it.
thank you
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qqjingai 花朵

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第三行 我想表达的是：游戏是大多数人们喜欢讨论的话题 尤其是男孩子。 麻烦翻译下吧 - - 然后最后一项我想表达：适度游戏益脑，沉迷游戏伤身， 这些我全是在英汉互译上直接打上中文 那机器给我翻译出来的

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楼主，要不你把中文写一遍出来，我帮你翻译吧。。这样改的话，很费力气。。。我快断网了，你可以随时联系我的百度HI。。。

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我没多少时间了 就将就吧 - - 谢谢你了 这么多人 我都不知道该采纳谁了

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呵呵。。。不用谢。。不过以后要写这样的演讲稿前可千万别这样临时抱佛脚了，翻译机器翻译出来的东西会被人笑话的哦。。。

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