December 22,2009
December 22,2009
Dear Mr.Smith
It’s so nice to have known you at the latest Guangzhou Trade Fair!
Actually ,I am really impressed by the new type of mobile phone which has been showed by your company ,so I want to know more about the mobile phone ,if you can tell me the details of this product,such as what specifications ,what colors ,what price and what functions does it has and so on.
To be honest,according to think twice,I am sure this new type of mobile phone will sell well in market.
I hope to establish a long-term business relationship with you!
Sincerely yours,
Mark Zhang
Dear Mr.Smith
It’s so nice to have known you at the latest Guangzhou Trade Fair!
Actually ,I am really impressed by the new type of mobile phone which has been showed by your company ,so I want to know more about the mobile phone ,if you can tell me the details of this product,such as what specifications ,what colors ,what price and what functions does it has and so on.
To be honest,according to think twice,I am sure this new type of mobile phone will sell well in market.
I hope to establish a long-term business relationship with you!
Sincerely yours,
Mark Zhang
tang_haiyang 幼苗
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第五行中的the mobile phone可以用代词it 代替，因为你前面已经提到了the mobile phone，所以为了避免重复用代词代替。 后面if you can 一直到and so on就有问题了，貌似是个条件状语从句，可没有主句，所以最好改成一个问句比较好：could you tell me the details of this product,such...
第五行中的the mobile phone可以用代词it 代替，因为你前面已经提到了the mobile phone，所以为了避免重复用代词代替。 后面if you can 一直到and so on就有问题了，貌似是个条件状语从句，可没有主句，所以最好改成一个问句比较好：could you tell me the details of this product,such...
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