请大家帮我看看这两句有没有语法错误?

请大家帮我看看这两句有没有语法错误?
  1. No matter how great an ideal you have, you should listen to the advice of your parents before doing something. If you do not love your family, you could not say that you love your country 2.. I was playing computer games when my parents asked me to have dinner, I usually ignore them


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第二句话你用的前半句是过去式,而后面却用了 “usually”.应该前后时态一致,所以要用“ignored”.而且中间还要接一个连接词 “but”, 所以是 “but i ignored them”.

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