急用 语法修改ResumeName:Xinwen,liu Gender:MaleDate Of Birth:02 Dec
急用 语法修改
Resume
Name:Xinwen,liu
Gender:Male
Date Of Birth:02 Dec 1988
Citizenship:Fujian,China
Major:Chinese
Tel:0423863496
Address:
24/106 Elizebath st Richmond VIC 3121
Education Backgroud:
September 2006 until now,Stott's College
Work Experience:
August,2006 -- Feb,2007 as a kitchenhand in Singapore Restaurant.
March 2007 -- March 2008,as a sales clerk ,Waiter in Northcote plazza charcoal chicken .
Objective:
I am applying for any position explore for wider experience and look for a more challenging oppotunity,That may enhance my work ablity.
Self-Evalution:
I am a deligent reliable motivated and my abilities have been recognized by both clients and my superisors.Strong sense of responsibility.Can learn new things well in short time.Friendly relationship.
有些语法错误请高手修改.（能再补充些内容就更好了）
Resume
Name:Xinwen,liu
Gender:Male
Date Of Birth:02 Dec 1988
Citizenship:Fujian,China
Major:Chinese
Tel:0423863496
Address:
24/106 Elizebath st Richmond VIC 3121
Education Backgroud:
September 2006 until now,Stott's College
Work Experience:
August,2006 -- Feb,2007 as a kitchenhand in Singapore Restaurant.
March 2007 -- March 2008,as a sales clerk ,Waiter in Northcote plazza charcoal chicken .
Objective:
I am applying for any position explore for wider experience and look for a more challenging oppotunity,That may enhance my work ablity.
Self-Evalution:
I am a deligent reliable motivated and my abilities have been recognized by both clients and my superisors.Strong sense of responsibility.Can learn new things well in short time.Friendly relationship.
有些语法错误请高手修改.（能再补充些内容就更好了）
赞 我才是三天 幼苗
共回答了29个问题采纳率：89.7% 举报
August,2006 -- Feb,2007 as a kitchenhand in Singapore Restaurant.
什么是kitchenhand啊?建议改成kitchen assistant
March 2007 -- March 2008,as a sales clerk ,Waiter in Northcote plazza charcoal chicken .
clerk一般是说OFFICE里的职员,你就说你是 sales或waiter就行了
另外,你可以写一写你做这些工作的时候学到了什么,比如team work之类的.
Objective:
I am applying for any position explore for wider experience and look for a more challenging oppotunity,That may enhance my work ablity.
CV不建议说申请所有的工作,那样别人会觉得你什么也不能做,你最好先打听清楚人家到底招什么职位的人,如果你对很多职位有兴趣,不要怕麻烦,多投几份.上面那段话语法错误太多了,建议改成
I am applying for any position in oder to gain more experience and take more challenging opportunities.That may enhance my work ablity.
Self-Evalution:
I am a diligent reliable and self-motivated person.My abilities have been recognized by both clients and my superisors.I have strong sense of responsibility and be able to learn new things well in short time.I also good at keeping a friendly relationship with other team members.
什么是kitchenhand啊?建议改成kitchen assistant
March 2007 -- March 2008,as a sales clerk ,Waiter in Northcote plazza charcoal chicken .
clerk一般是说OFFICE里的职员,你就说你是 sales或waiter就行了
另外,你可以写一写你做这些工作的时候学到了什么,比如team work之类的.
Objective:
I am applying for any position explore for wider experience and look for a more challenging oppotunity,That may enhance my work ablity.
CV不建议说申请所有的工作,那样别人会觉得你什么也不能做,你最好先打听清楚人家到底招什么职位的人,如果你对很多职位有兴趣,不要怕麻烦,多投几份.上面那段话语法错误太多了,建议改成
I am applying for any position in oder to gain more experience and take more challenging opportunities.That may enhance my work ablity.
Self-Evalution:
I am a diligent reliable and self-motivated person.My abilities have been recognized by both clients and my superisors.I have strong sense of responsibility and be able to learn new things well in short time.I also good at keeping a friendly relationship with other team members.
1年前
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happyyuying 幼苗
共回答了9个问题 举报
Work Experience--Work Experiences
I am a deligent reliable motvated person...
Friendly relationship.有点像强加进去的,后边加个as well会好点...
I am a deligent reliable motvated person...
Friendly relationship.有点像强加进去的,后边加个as well会好点...
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