请高手帮我检查和修正以下我的文章句子 >

请高手帮我检查和修正以下我的文章句子 ><
看看我写的 essay行不行 有没有 2 analyticsl paragraph
句子不通顺的地方 请帮我修改和重新编排 修改成一篇好的 essay
我写的句子 里面有没有 ( claim & evidennce & analysis) 阿 请帮我看看吧 ><
顺便帮我把中文的那段 帮英文 >
In the poem,a red flag can symbolize danger and a warning ,
可以想象恋人之间的关系里会有什么危险,可以结合后面的词来想象,
Chemical may symbolize the chemical reaction and chemical change
An axe and a bruised thumb symbolize aggressive,breaks or splits things.
Pas de deux symbolize the ballet dance for two people.The author use metaphysic to describe a couple lover’s relationships.,有时候他们也许会因为纷争而吵架和受伤 因而起了化学变化,导致他们的关系变危险 有时候却有甜蜜的像跳双人舞蹈一样 黏在一起 互不分开.对作者来说,爱情似乎充满了矛盾、危险、及刺激
我写的第一段 有 introduction hook 拜托帮我看看罗
我的文章里有 conclusion 若没有的话 帮我弄个小小的conclusion >
wangwangkay 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

逍遥石英钟 幼苗

共回答了24个问题采纳率:95.8% 举报

What does love truly mean?What (it means 改为 does it mean) to be in love?Before I read this poem,I haven’t really considered about love,especially in relationships with someone.But after (要加I have) read this poem,I realized that we can use different way to look at love.
In this love poem by Sandra Cisneros,the author gives us so many idea(ideas) about the different meaning of love.Specifically(Especially) she shows that boys and girls in a relationship with different kinds of emotions ,love could be like crazy and dangerous,love is an adventure and risky.The author applies many single words and items(应该用terms) to correlate the relationship(s) and paradoxes between the two lovers.In the poem,a red flag can symbolize danger and a warning.Chemical may symbolize the chemical reaction and chemical change.
An axe and a bruised thumb symbolize aggressive,breaks or splits things.
Pas de deux symbolize the ballet dance for two people.The author use(uses) metaphysic to describe a couple lover’s relationships.
以上只是序述那首诗,下而我替你加上一小段conculsion:
So,love can a a beautiful thing for both boys and the girls,if they have found their true match — their Mr Right or Mrs Right.But most of time,two lovers began with hot relationships and ended up badly or even tragically.Looking for true love and the right person to love and the person would love you back the same is a very difficult thing,sometimes even kind of impossible for some those with strange characters.Therefore,although there are 7 billion people in this world,there could be only one or none is your true match and if there is you have to find and indentify him / her!
对不起,因时差问题,回答迟了你,同时很感谢你的求助,

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wangwangkay 举报

不好意思 问一下喔 我的文章有没有 2 analyticsl paragraph & introduction hook ?

举报 逍遥石英钟

第一段便是: introduction hook 第二段便是: analyticsl paragraph 第三段是我替你加上去的: conculsion 了。

dannylin 幼苗

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What is the real meaning of love(与后句不同句式避免重复)? What does it mean to be in love? I haven’t really thought about love until(建议句式更改,换做until 直到……才) I read this poem, especially falling in love(避免重复,用词多样化)...

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