求改英语语法和结构,写得很乱,Analytical skills were very essential in this

求改英语语法和结构,写得很乱,
Analytical skills were very essential in this module.It is because the good decisions are making by thoughtful analysis.
For instance,at the beginning of this group project; we have to decide which part of Green Challenge we have to concentrate on,because Green Challenge is a big topic.If we choose an inappropriate topic,it is more difficult for us to continue.We assume that topic such as green house effect,it is too far from our life,and not many people will realize it as an important issue.Therefore,trough the discussion and research,we choose to focus on energy saving,it is because by research we find most people waste energy and there are many ways for them to saving energy.
In addition,when we doing the energy awareness survey around Endcliffe,after we gathering the information from students at Endcliffe.We still had to use analytical skills.We analyzed the results of the all questionnaire by making graphs and charts.For example a graph to show how important do students think saving energy is?
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Analytical skills are very essential in this module,which is because of the fact that the good decisions are made by thoughtful analysis.For instance,in the beginning of this group poject,we have to decide which part of Green Challenge we have to concentrate on,for Green Challenge is a big topic.So if we choose an inappropriagte one,we will find it difficult to continue.Aassuming that the topic gets at the green house effect,we find it too far from our life,and not many people wil realize it as an important issue.Therefore,our attention pays to the energy saving based on the situation that most people waste energy and are not able to find a way to deal with it from those practical ways ,after the discussion and researches.In fact,great effort has been put into the energy awarencess survey after our collecting the information from students at Endcliffe.Still,we have to use analytical skill ,due to all the questionnaire by graphs and charts.For example showing a graph ,which is to demonstrate how important it is for student to think about saving energy.

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