作文求改 （语法）It was a Saturday afternoon,Diane wore a red dree,s
作文求改 （语法）
It was a Saturday afternoon,Diane wore a red dree,she was waiting for Joe in a French restaurant.Few minutes after,Joe arrived.Dine was happy to meet him; however,Joe seemed impatient.He simply asked her questions and always looked outside by window.Diane continued to speak with him and afterwards,Joe became in supportable.He looked at Diane seriously and said:"I already have a girlfriend who names Terry.I sent in a form to Find-a-Love（交友公司）because one of my best friend asked me to accompany." Diane was surprised,she felt a little comfortless,but she was very pleased for her friend.(Diane 和Terry是好朋友,Diane为好友来试探）
It was a Saturday afternoon,Diane wore a red dree,she was waiting for Joe in a French restaurant.Few minutes after,Joe arrived.Dine was happy to meet him; however,Joe seemed impatient.He simply asked her questions and always looked outside by window.Diane continued to speak with him and afterwards,Joe became in supportable.He looked at Diane seriously and said:"I already have a girlfriend who names Terry.I sent in a form to Find-a-Love（交友公司）because one of my best friend asked me to accompany." Diane was surprised,she felt a little comfortless,but she was very pleased for her friend.(Diane 和Terry是好朋友,Diane为好友来试探）
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It was a Saturday afternoon.Diane was waiting for Joe in a French restaurant and she wore a red dree.Few minutes later,Joe arrived.Dine was happy to meet him; however,Joe seemed impatient.He simply asked her questions and always looked outside the window.Diane continued to speak to him and then,Joe became insupportable.He looked at Diane seriously and said:"I already have a girlfriend who named Terry.I sent a form to Find-a-Love（交友公司）because one of my best friend asked me to accompany." Diane was surprised,she felt a little comfortless,but she was very pleased for her friend.
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