麻烦详细分析一个英语句子的语法am almost dead,surviving from day to day,from

这句话有问题,应该为
I am almost dead,
我快要死了
surviving from day to day,from hour to hour,
一天天地活着,一个小时一个小时地活着
ever since i was taken from my home and
从我被从家里抓出来
brought here with tens of thousands of
被带到这里,和其他成千上百的犹太人一起
other jews.
自从我被从家里抓出来,和其他成千上百的犹太人一起被带到这里,一天天地,一个小时一个小时地,（虽然活着）我快要死了.