高一英语作文 请指教打分30分制

高一英语作文 请指教打分30分制
Dear Amy
Thank you for writing me this letter.you are said to be laughed at due to your obesity.here is some advise I offer to you in order to help you attain your confidence once again and reduce your depression .
First of all,A balance diet does good to your body greatly,It’s of benefit to you to have a heathy food in the course of daily life.
Additionally,Never slight the importance of exercise,which will exert a remarkable influence on you.
Last but not the least ,You ought to attach significence to your mood,appearance is not everything.A beautiful inner is better!