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题三：My Hometown______wuxi
Wuxi is a modern city which is near shanghai.There are many high buildings and great parks here.People here are kind and food is delicious .do you like picnic?Shibawan is one of the best place for it.Yes,this is my hometown,Wuxi.
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My dream home
My dream home is a peaceful and beautiful house.A big and clear French window is needed.I also want a chair and a desk and I need a black PC on it.Surely,my Beige bed near it must be soft and big.This is my dream home,the house I want.
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The green family
The Green Family came to China five years ago.Mr.Green came here on business.He loved the peace of land as soon as he arrived here.When they moved here,his two children,Bill and Sally,were young.But all of them were excited.After getting here,Bill and Sally were sent to a primary school.And Ms Green worked in a hospital.Now,they have already had many friends and they stay here happily.
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1.WUxi is a modern city , from shanghai not far.
2.There are a lot of tall buildings and beautiful park inside city
3.People here act towards people friendly , the foodstuff is very tasty.

我的英语口语曾经很差，我以为我永远也学不好。新采的老师建议我每天大声朗读。可是开始时我无法读下去，不会的词太多。我都不想再学英语了。就在那时，有个声音告诉我：“不要放弃，加油!”于是我坚持每天朗读半个小时。现在我的口语进步了很多，我还在学校的英语演讲比赛中得过一等奖呢!
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1.Wu xi is a modern city, not far from Shanghai
2.The city there are many high-rise buildings and beautiful parks
3.The people are friendly and the food is very delicious
4.Do you like a picnic? Shibawan is a good place for a picnic

1.My dream home is very big and clean. It has at least five floors and fifteen rooms. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room and a bathroom. There are no other rooms on the ground floo...