请大家检查一下这篇文章,有没有错误,越细越好。

请大家检查一下这篇文章,有没有错误,越细越好。
Ladies and gentlemen, good morning:
I am honored to be here to give you a speech. Today, my topic is “Defeat makes me stronger”. Last week, I felt not very happy because of the midterm examinations. I didn’t do well in it. I have failed.
Once, my mother told me that only two kinds of animals could climb up to the top of the pyramids. One is the eagle, and the other is the snail. If it is doomed that I can’t be an eagle flying high. I would like to be a little snail who always believes that success in life comes from persistent efforts. Today if I get into the top fifteen, I will have a big success. If not, I will fail again. But I’ll collect my defeats as the paving stones on my way to success. I say to myself that I should face up to the defeats bravely. I believe myself and try my best. In this way, success will come soon! And I also believe that if who smiles till the last, who smiles best! That’s all, thank you!
天天开心 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

我烦不想讲 幼苗

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Ladies and gentlemen, good morning: -Good morning, ladies and gentlemen:
give you a speech.-make a speech(give you a speech is Chinglish)
the midterm examinations. I didn’t do well in it. -it改为them因为前面是examinations
I have failed. 既然是上周的事,这里应该用failed,另外,为了与上文衔接,最好再加上and thus,即and thus I failed.
I believe myself and try my best.-I believe in myself and will surely try my best.
that if who smiles till the last, who smiles best! -that he who smiles till the end smiles best.

1年前

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ariel20 幼苗

共回答了17个问题采纳率:94.1% 举报

他前面已经提到了两种,后面用the other应该是正确的

1年前

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jxzz1996 幼苗

共回答了16个问题采纳率:87.5% 举报

给你看了一下,如果你想要大家查看语法,我基本上看了没什么问题只有
1. "One is the eagle",后面最好改成and another
2. "If it is doomed that I can’t be an eagle flying high",后面句号改成逗号
3."I say to myself that I should face up to the ...

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