写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈

写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈
In september 2007, i begin work for a health club as a reception, it's about four month;next year,i'm very glad to be a assistant hall manager in icbc. During this time,i think wherever i have a job to do.i try to do it to the best of my bility.i enjoy working with others as well as alone.i am a very reliable and conscientious. 语法不是很好,大家给纠个错吧!
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文章应该用一般过去时,所以begin要改为began.其他动词也要改为过去时.后面begin work 的语法有错,begin后接to do 或doing ,不能直接接动词原形.可以改为began to work.next year 后面讲的是将来的事情要用过去将来时.I try to do it to the best of...这句话应该改为I try to do it the best of .中间没有哪个to.才疏学浅,

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