帮写下Hobbies and Interests

According to the survey I did in my school, I conclude the main hobbies and interests of students. Over 50% students like playing musical instruments in their spare time。 Next ,36% students like surfing the Internet, reading takes possession of 8%, and to my surprise, only 3% of the students like doing sports. I think playing the muscial instrument is good, because it can cultivate people's characters, surfing the Internet can let us know about the latest news and current affairs in the world. However, few students pay attention to reading and doing sports, I think this situation needs to be improved, because reading is still the best way to gain knowledge, and we need to doing proper sports to keep healthy. 通过我在学校做的调查，我总结出了学生主要的兴趣爱好。超过50%的学生喜欢在课余时间弹奏乐器，接下来，36%的学生喜欢上网。 阅读占了8%， 让我吃惊的是 只有3%的学生喜欢做运动。 我认为弹奏乐器是好的，因为它能陶冶人的情操，上网可以往我们知道世界上最新的时事新闻。然后，只有少数学生注重阅读和运动，我想这种情况需要改善，因为书本始终是我们获得知识的最好途径，而且我们需要做适当运动来保持健康。
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