假如有一天早晨醒来发现自己已经80岁 周围会有哪些不同 英语作文

If I found myself be an eighty years old woman,I would be surprised and exciting.I would have lots of my own time to do whatever I like if I was in good health.I would live in an apartment on my own but I would feel lonely because I would have an old dog to be with me.I could cook myself delicious food and I would spend more time doing sports.I could do some shopping by myself.
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楼上是不是直接翻译的..有语法错误？