求修改一篇大学英语口语测试的自我介绍

求修改一篇大学英语口语测试的自我介绍



修改如下几个方面:词汇及语法错误,更高级的表达方式,语句逻辑的组织
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Self Introduction
Good afternoon,I am ZZH,an 18 years old boy learnt in FuZhon.it is my pleasure to have a self introduction in this test.As a contemporary college student,I am out-going and like to do some exercise in my spare time,such as running and playing ball games,and football is what I like the most.In my family,my parents and grandparents really love me and give me lots of care,but I did not live up to their expectation,I was admitted to XXX.Now,I am leading my university life,which is a self independence one.though there are a number of differences between my present life and past studying life,I will try my best to adapt to it.I believe I will reach a higher level with my great efforts.

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