英语很烂,麻烦帮我组织一下好吗?abstract

1楼不对..."how to manage and properly use funds" 是一件事, 所以是"becomes."
With the world economic development, how to manage and properly use the funds becomes an important topic for FOREIGN trade enterprises. Now, there are quite a few PROBLEMS IN the fund management SYSTEM for Chinese foreign trade enterprises, which brings great risks to THEIR (success and wellbeing). This article discusses the problems in fund management to PROVIDE some countermeasures and solutions for foreign trade enterprises.
其实不错, 就几个地方可以该一点~ 比一些美国人中学生都写的好...

With the development of the world economy,（后半句还可以）.Now, there are quite a few problems existing in the fund management ....., which have brought about great risks to them.....后面还可以

With the development of the world economy, how to manage and properly use the funds becomes an important topic to the foreign trade enterprises.Now, there’re quite a few problems existed in the fund m...