请会写英文简历的朋友帮我看看写的哪里不对?

请会写英文简历的朋友帮我看看写的哪里不对?
1249 mailbox, South Campus
Harbin University of Science and Technology,150080
13251l@126.com
R*** Zhang

Objective
To contribute acquired administrative skills to a position which is related with English.
Education
2004.09-2008.06 Major:Foreign Trade English Harbin University of Science and Technology
Scholarships and Awards
 2007 Third-class scholarship
 2006 Third-class scholarship
 2004 Second-class scholarship
Certificates
 2007.6 BEC Priliminary
 2007.6 CET-6
 2006.4 TEM-4
 2005.12 CET-4
English Skills
 Strong ability of transition and oral English, basic knowledge about business and foreign trade English
 Good ability of English writing
 Know English knowledge about Mechanical ,Physics,Electric Engineering and so on
Experience
 Working as an assistant translater in Harbin Fair for Business Negotiation this year, receive good evaluation from the compinies
 Sales person in Suger and Drink Fair for Business in the year of 2007
 English tutor in senior high school during university times
Computer Ability
Basic knowledge of computer operation, Skilled in use of Office, word, and E-commerce.
Self-assessment
Good communication skill, team work, a stable personality and high sense of responsibility.