这是今年高考的任务型写作,总分25分,我只得了15分,里面应该有许多语法错误,请指出并改正,感激不尽

这是今年高考的任务型写作,总分25分,我只得了15分,里面应该有许多语法错误,请指出并改正,感激不尽
The passage it tells us many people dislike his jobs and the reason why cause it.And finally the author tells us the importance about ordinary jobs in modern society.
There is no doubt that cleaning streets is a very hard works.As cleaners whose jobs is cleaning streets have to get up in 4:00 when many people are sleeping.They need clean many places ,and it is using their many energy.
On no account can we ignore the importance of cleaners.If the society don’t have them,our world will be dirty.What is more serious is we can’t live in earth after the world become dirty.
There is no one but longs to become a hero and have a unusual jobs.But it is on denying that ordinary jobs play a part in society .As a ordinary people,we should do better our jobs and love them.
找出10个错误得50分.超过10每超过2个追加5分.