找出下列段落中不恰当的句子In today's world many people appear to be hungr
找出下列段落中不恰当的句子
In today's world many people appear to be hungry for money.Sonme of them even risk their lives in pursuit of it.Is money everything?I don't think so.The poor can achieve a decent living standard wiht money,but can we buy time with money?
In today's world many people appear to be hungry for money.Sonme of them even risk their lives in pursuit of it.Is money everything?I don't think so.The poor can achieve a decent living standard wiht money,but can we buy time with money?
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最后一句话不合适,没有逻辑,穷人的生活标准怎么和用金钱买时间扯上关系了.
而且整段话转折太大,一个观点还没展开,另一个观点又出现了.
而且整段话转折太大,一个观点还没展开,另一个观点又出现了.
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