请问老师看看这篇文章有没有语法错误?　　　If I were a bird,I would

请问老师看看这篇文章有没有语法错误?　　　If I were a bird,I would
fly in the sky,because I always dream about flying in the sky.I would fly to the mountains and woods.And fly in the sky to see the beautiful city.
　　　If I were a bird,I would live in the tree.When I was a kid,I want to know the birds doing what on the tree?Are they feeling bored?How do they feel about living on a tree?