帮忙看看英语文章有没有语法错误!感激不尽!

帮忙看看英语文章有没有语法错误!感激不尽!
Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a very happy day for many boys and girls.I can still remember the day last year I got the happiness feeling,because that day is my girl friend to accompany me through.
That day,when I was waiting for her,a hand covered my eyes suddenly.I am not surprise,because I know she is a naughty girl.To my surprise,she dressed as an angel.I have never seen her so beautiful.At that moment ,I think my heart all belongs to her.
Then, wo walk to the movie theater hand in hand.We would go and see 《Daisy》.In the middle of the movie,she was as near crying as makes no difference.How lovely she is!hahaha……
On our way home,she whipped an apple out of her pocket.She told me that the apple shoule be eat at 0 a.m.At that time,her face as red as this apple,I dissolved into kiss her.
What a sweet Christmas Eve!What a memorable night!
She told me,’’I will is waiting for you, not only are you the people’s own army,but also my personal hero.’’I was profoundly touched.Yes,I can’t keep her company for everyday,but,I can treasure her,I can tell you attentively,I love her!Believe me,I will try my best to give you the happiness life!