帮忙看看……英文小短稿我按中文稿翻的,中文稿是自己写的,水平不好别见怪……今天是2010年的第一个星期一,很荣幸可以由我

帮忙看看……英文小短稿
我按中文稿翻的,中文稿是自己写的,水平不好别见怪……
今天是2010年的第一个星期一,很荣幸可以由我们高一十四班为大家服务.
新年伊始,我们终于以一种回首的姿态看着2009渐行渐远.然而我们来不及回忆往昔,就必须以一种坚定的心态,踏上新的旅程.我们为未来奋斗,为理想拼搏.事实上,只不过是需求心安理得罢了.请记住并在乎这句话,“你所做的一切是否对得起你所承受的苦难”.生命不相信如果,不会让遗憾和错过重新来过.我们在无尽的黑暗中寻找微熹晨光,只不过是希望夜色褪去后回首那些泥泞的脚印,不会硬生生地编造“如果”来欺骗自己.我们十四班的班训是:日出东方,十四不败.尽管黑夜太长,以至于我们习惯了黑暗,迷失了方向,但只要坚定不移地面向东方,阴影必然会被我们抛弃身后.
新的一年,每一个新的日子里,为了爱我们的人与我们爱的人,做一个最好的自己!
Today is the first Monday of the year 2010,it's an honor for class 14,grade 1 to serve you.
New year has begun,we saw the past year far away from us.But we have no time to recollect the past.We have to step the new journey by firm strides.We fight for our future and dream.In fact,we just explore the way to make us have an easy conscience.Remember the word,"what you do whether or not it is worth doing."Life doesn't believe "if",so it doesn't let the regrets and misses repeat.We search for twilight in the darkless,just in order that when we look at the footsteps,we would not feel regret and make up many sentences which begin with "if".Our class motto is "The sun rises from the east,and we won't be loser."Even though dark is so long that we are used to the darkness and lost our direction.But if we insist on ourselves,the cloud will be threw away.
Every day in the new year,for whom we love and who loves us ,to best ourselves!
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Today is the first Monday of the year 2010,it's an honor for class 14,grade 1 to serve you.
The new year has begun,we have left behind the past year far away from us.But we have no time to recollect.We have to step on the new journey with firm strides.We fight for our future and dreams.In fact,we just want to explore the way to have an easy conscience.Remember the words,"whether what you do worth it or not."Life doesn't believe in "if",so it won't let the regrets and opportunities we missed repeat.We search for twilight in the endless darkness so that when we look at the footsteps,we would not feel regret or make up any sentences which begin with "if".Our class motto is "The sun rises from the east,and we won't be losers."Even though darkness lasts so long that we are used to the darkness and have lost our direction.But if we insist on ourselves,the cloud will be eliminated.
To be better and to be ourselves,in each day of the new year,for the ones we love and the ones who love us!

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