英语ps第四段I read so many magazines about computers to know so m
英语ps第四段
I read so many magazines about computers to know so much information of different area of computer:Latest technology,Neo-hardware and advanced concepts,etc.These information can help me to know development of computers,which enables me to consider the future pattern of games,because more powerful hardware means stylists can use technology to reach his originality,which may can not been done on previous time.There are also many reviews of new games ,hardwares and analysis of games,and these bring me so much information to me.
I read so many magazines about computers to know so much information of different area of computer:Latest technology,Neo-hardware and advanced concepts,etc.These information can help me to know development of computers,which enables me to consider the future pattern of games,because more powerful hardware means stylists can use technology to reach his originality,which may can not been done on previous time.There are also many reviews of new games ,hardwares and analysis of games,and these bring me so much information to me.
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to know so much information of different area改为areas；These information can help me to know development of computers这里直接用help sb.do就可以了；stylists can use technology to reach his originality变为stylists can use technology to reach their originalities；which may can not been变为which may not been或which can not been；on previous time变为at previous time;analysis of变为analysis on；and these bring me so much information to me去掉第一个me因为重复.
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