高一英语改错题I‘d like to tell you something more about our schools

高一英语改错题
I‘d like to tell you something more about our school
sports meeting.It was holding on Oct.6,which was a
fine day.There were over1000 students and teachers
attend it.Wang,a student from my class won the
100-meter race.He finish the race in 12.6 seconds
but broke the school recond.The sports meeting
was really success.That was because we were
all trying to do my best.Although Iwas
not one of the winner,I was proud of
that we had done.LOOking forward to receiving your letter.
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