求助,请帮我看看这几句英文有没有错误,错误请指出.不甚感谢.

求助,请帮我看看这几句英文有没有错误,错误请指出.不甚感谢.
As for the course“ Computer Network Technology and Application”, she also got a pretty high score, 91 of 100, top 10, we know that the education of social skills are important since we should enable that students could adapt the social work; In order to more effectively enhance professional skills of students, they should have a more specific professional learning such as Construction Materials(her score: 91 of 100 , top 10);