请英语高手们帮忙看一篇文章这是一篇要求30秒的演讲稿,Dear judges,good afternoon!My nam
请英语高手们帮忙看一篇文章
这是一篇要求30秒的演讲稿,
Dear judges,good afternoon!My name is Ding and I`m from Harbin No.3 High School,which is the best high school in Heilongjiang Province.In the past 10 years,I have been studying English very hard and have acquired basic knowledge of the English language.When I am free,I prefer to watch American dramas for relaxing.About future,I want to apply for Peking Universaty to realise my dream.That is all,thank you for listening!
帮忙改一下语法错误和说的不地道的地方！
这是一篇要求30秒的演讲稿,
Dear judges,good afternoon!My name is Ding and I`m from Harbin No.3 High School,which is the best high school in Heilongjiang Province.In the past 10 years,I have been studying English very hard and have acquired basic knowledge of the English language.When I am free,I prefer to watch American dramas for relaxing.About future,I want to apply for Peking Universaty to realise my dream.That is all,thank you for listening!
帮忙改一下语法错误和说的不地道的地方！
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nicolezhao0 幼苗
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尊敬的评委，晚上好。我叫丁，我来自黑龙江最好的高中，哈尔滨第三中学。在过去的十年里，我非常刻苦地学习英语，而且获得了英语的基本知识。当我空闲的时候，我喜欢看美国戏剧来放松。对于未来，我想要申请北京大学去实现我的梦想。就这样了，谢谢你们！
哦 是修改啊
这样就很好了...
哦 是修改啊
这样就很好了...
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