手动改错!不要用谷歌改错!Go手动改错!不要用谷歌改错!Good afternoon,everyone.My name
手动改错!不要用谷歌改错!Go
手动改错!不要用谷歌改错!Good afternoon,everyone.
My name is Xing Shihan,I come from Chongqing.But,I want to introduce my hometown Langzhong to you,This is an ancient city in northeast of Sichuan,It's also one of the four ancient Cities!
There are many tourist attractions,such as Zhang Fei templel,jinping hill and so on.
Baoning vinegar,Zhang Fei beef and Baitang zhengmo are also the specialty!
If you have spare time,I hope you can visit there!
About myself,I like listening to music,watching movies and so on.You may be hard to imagine I like swimming,but I am too lazy!
I also like to make friends.I hope we would be good friends.
That's all,Thank you!
手动改错!不要用谷歌改错!Good afternoon,everyone.
My name is Xing Shihan,I come from Chongqing.But,I want to introduce my hometown Langzhong to you,This is an ancient city in northeast of Sichuan,It's also one of the four ancient Cities!
There are many tourist attractions,such as Zhang Fei templel,jinping hill and so on.
Baoning vinegar,Zhang Fei beef and Baitang zhengmo are also the specialty!
If you have spare time,I hope you can visit there!
About myself,I like listening to music,watching movies and so on.You may be hard to imagine I like swimming,but I am too lazy!
I also like to make friends.I hope we would be good friends.
That's all,Thank you!
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My name is Xing Shihan,I come from Chongqing.But(But - And),I want to introduce my hometown Langzhong to you,This is an ancient city in northeast of Sichuan,It's also one of the four ancient Cities!
There are many tourist attractions,such as Zhang Fei templel,jinping hill and so on.
Baoning vinegar,Zhang Fei beef and Baitang zhengmo are also the specialty!
If you have spare time,I hope you can visit there(there- them)!
About myself,I like listening to music,watching movies and so on.You may be hard to imagine I like swimming,(整个句子改为 It may be hard for you to imagine I like swimming) but(but - and) I am too lazy!
I also like to make friends.I hope we would (would - can)be good friends.
That's all,Thank you!
My name is Xing Shihan,I come from Chongqing.But(But - And),I want to introduce my hometown Langzhong to you,This is an ancient city in northeast of Sichuan,It's also one of the four ancient Cities!
There are many tourist attractions,such as Zhang Fei templel,jinping hill and so on.
Baoning vinegar,Zhang Fei beef and Baitang zhengmo are also the specialty!
If you have spare time,I hope you can visit there(there- them)!
About myself,I like listening to music,watching movies and so on.You may be hard to imagine I like swimming,(整个句子改为 It may be hard for you to imagine I like swimming) but(but - and) I am too lazy!
I also like to make friends.I hope we would (would - can)be good friends.
That's all,Thank you!
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