请帮忙看这几句话我写得对不对1,Surely,employees receive lots of advantages
请帮忙看这几句话我写得对不对
1,Surely,employees receive lots of advantages from working at home.For instance,they save plenty of time which supposed to waste on the way between home and office.
我想知道 receive 还有which supposed to waste on the way between home and office.这样写对吗?
2,Maybe the most important one is that employers can't sure their workers are really working in working time.
这里连用两个working time我觉得比较笨拙,有没有较好的写法?
3,Working or not depends on employees' self-discipline,not depends on their work location.
用depends还是depend?这样写意思表达出来了吗?
1,Surely,employees receive lots of advantages from working at home.For instance,they save plenty of time which supposed to waste on the way between home and office.
我想知道 receive 还有which supposed to waste on the way between home and office.这样写对吗?
2,Maybe the most important one is that employers can't sure their workers are really working in working time.
这里连用两个working time我觉得比较笨拙,有没有较好的写法?
3,Working or not depends on employees' self-discipline,not depends on their work location.
用depends还是depend?这样写意思表达出来了吗?
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My suggestions:
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recieve ...get
lots of .many
For instance.For example
save plenty time .can save time that would otherwise be wasted on the road.
2.Maybe one of the important issues is that employers may not be convinced if workers are really working at home.
3.Wether working or not depends on.not on...
1.
recieve ...get
lots of .many
For instance.For example
save plenty time .can save time that would otherwise be wasted on the road.
2.Maybe one of the important issues is that employers may not be convinced if workers are really working at home.
3.Wether working or not depends on.not on...
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