英语小作文（急!）要求：1.以第一人称进行描写.场景：有三只鸡、一只羊、一只猪、一匹马、一头牛、十一只小鸭、一只大鸭、五

Today I went to a small but beautiful farm.I saw a lot of animals .There were three chickens、a sheep and a horse.I also saw a cow.Later I saw many ducks.In a pond an old duck was swimming with eleven little ducks.They were lovely!I was not lonely there,because there was five children and three adults with me.It was a nice day!

要写的简单点，还是深刻点？