梦见了天使
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Dream and reality
Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children. Regardless of the children’s interest, some parents want them to attend all kinds of other classes, laying a heavy burden on their shoulders. As a result, the children almost have no time to play.
A typical case is my neighbor Mr. and Mrs. Wang. They want their child to be an artist. They choose a music class on Saturday and a painting on Sunday for the child. In fact, the child has no interest at all. The child is kept busy all day. After a few years their efforts are in vain.
I think parents should let their children develop their talent by their own choice and interests and give them enough time and space to learn what they want to. Children should be encouraged to get close to nature. We should help children turn their dream of enjoying the beauty of nature into reality. Only in this way can children have a happy and enjoyable life.
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