请大家帮我改改这段话!Well,I would rather like to the person who prefer

请大家帮我改改这段话!
Well,I would rather like to the person who prefers to solve any challenges all by myself.First,each challenge is a cherishing opportunity for me.If someone helps me with that,it means that i'll lose this chance.That's not what i want.In addition,trying some difficulties will develop your skills and enrich your knowledge.Thus only if,i am able to advance myself.Finally,if i figure out that challenge,i will become more confident.And that is beneficial to my study and life.As you know,if someone lack confidence ,he will lose every game in the society.
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骆驼泉子 幼苗

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首先,我表示一楼完全在灌水.根本就没改几个错.
我改了很多语法错误,而且帮你改了下句式和用词.你读读看吧.
Well,I would rather be the person who prefer to solve any challenge all by myself.First,each challenge is a cherishing opportunity for me.But if someone helps me to solve it,then it means that I will lose the opportunity to solve it on my own,which is not want I want.In addition,taking on challenges will develop my skills and enrich my knowledge,and therefore I will be able to improve.Last but not least,by taking on the challenges,I will be more confident,which is beneficial to my future life since being confident means willing to take on challenge,and without confidents,one will miss a lot of great opportunities in the society.

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