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A teenager can never have too much great music .Such as rock music ,pop music and so on .however,my forrite kind of music is piano music -For elise .It was written by Beethoven .This is one of the most wonderful music I have ever heard .Because Ihave senced a lively girl is running .As soon as I listen the song ,Ienjoy it very much .When I was six,I always had listened to it before I selpt .So far ,I also prefer listning piano music to listening other .Although I am not very musical .I also know whether this music is great or not .So I think you should listen to this melody ,because you feel excited and enjoy it ,when you listn it .Whaat a pity that you is not listening to this wonderful song!