"All summer in a Day" by Ray Bradbury.This story is about a

"All summer in a Day" by Ray Bradbury.This story is about a young girl,living on Venus came to the Earth.Venus just has a hour of summer which mean one hour of sun for every seven years.Margot,the main character,order kids deprived her summer; they lock her in a closet,because Margot was different to order kids.
The story make we reader,a cannot join and feeling's world,a sad story.For whole summer,of a day Margot is lock in a closet,and cannot see the sun of she's been long for since her first came to live on Venus.The kids in her class trap her go in closet,because they think Margot acts as if she was better then everybody,she came to Venus after the order kids,she remembers the sun,order kids just see the sun during they about two years old,and never seen the sun again.This why I feel stupid.
After an hour,sun was disappears which mean the summer of Venus's summer is end,they go back inside the closet,they all remembers her.In All Summer in a Day the theme is sad.The All Summer in a day is short story,it didn't have many thing can we learn,just can use teach ours reading and language arts.
"All summer in a Day" by Ray Bradbury in this story,you can sit,don't think anything.In summer,Margot being lock the closet,but other was look the sun play hide-and seek,run around of playground,they are happy,but Margot's heart is crying.
Did Margot's friends change?I will say they chang,because for story end story said they think they know the lock Margot in the closet is wrong,and I can fell they think they are wrong,if they lock in closet cannot seen the sun,the are sad too.Margot cannot see the sun is sad,but Margot change her friebds.
Day by day,year by year,Margot need wait order seven year and 2,556 day,a long time to see the sun and summer.The story is short just about 550 words,but is a good story,different A Summer Tragedy,two short stories all about the summer,but one is show differences,one is tragedy of summer.
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All summer in a Day" by Ray Bradbury. This story is about a young girl, living on Venus came to the Earth. Venus just has a hour of summer which mean one hour of sun for every seven years. Margot, the main character, order kids deprived her summer; they lock her in a closet, because Margot was different to order kids.
The story make we reader, a cannot join and feeling's world, a sad story. For whole summer, of a day Margot is lock in a closet, and cannot see the sun of she's been long for since her first came to live on Venus. The kids in her class trap her go in closet, because they think Margot acts as if she was better then everybody, she came to Venus after the order kids, she remembers the sun, order kids just see the sun during they about two years old, and never seen the sun again. This why I feel stupid.
After an hour, sun was disappears which mean the summer of Venus's summer is end, they go back inside the closet, they all remembers her. In All Summer in a Day the theme is sad. The All Summer in a day is short story, it didn't have many thing can we learn, just can use teach ours reading and language arts.
"All summer in a Day" by Ray Bradbury in this story, you can sit, don't think anything. In summer, Margot being lock the closet, but other was look the sun play hide-and seek, run around of playground, they are happy, but Margot's heart is crying.
Did Margot's friends change? I will say they chang, because for story end story said they think they know the lock Margot in the closet is wrong, and I can fell they think they are wrong, if they lock in closet cannot seen the sun, the are sad too. Margot cannot see the sun is sad, but Margot change her friebds.
Day by day, year by year, Margot need wait order seven year and 2,556 day, a long time to see the sun and summer. The story is short just about 550 words, but is a good story, different A Summer Tragedy, two short stories all about the summer, but one is show differences, one is tragedy of summer.
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