英语翻译主要意思是他努力工作,把会计理论与实践结合 一类的套话帮忙看下有没有什么错误,另:虚心请教怎么样说好一点呢?Du

谢谢你的信任,以下建议供参考,因为不知道你中文的意思如何,仅从英语语法的角度出发的.
1）应为put many efforts
2)hesitate asking是不好意思提问的意思,虚心请教用“consult in an open mind"比较合适.所以第一句的第二并列部分宜改为：and always consulted with predecessor in an open mind.3)apply是行为动词,不需要助动词do来构成过去式,所以第二句宜改成He also pay much attention to applying accountancy theory into practice,或……to combine accountancy theory with practice.4)At the same time……说明还是实习期间的事,那么还得用一般过去时.另外如果你是说坚持改善的规章,用adhere是对的,如果是说遵守,那么用observe较好.所以这一句改成he adhered to the company's rules为宜.
5）Respecting and getting along with others你大概是想说由于你……,所以同事们…….分词短语做状语是可以的,但这里,你本人和同事不是一个主体,所以不能这样组织句子,你可改为Owing to （或Due to）his well respecting and getting along with others
6)最后一句意思有点乱,建议修改为：co-workers all gave their appreciation to him who left his excellent impression in the company

During his internship he put many efforts into his work and never hesitated asking predecessors. He also did well in applying accountancy theory into practice. At the same time, he complied with the c...

这段话语句还是很通顺的，措辞也很得体。
有几个小问题提出来和楼主商榷：
1）predecessors一词显得稍大，觉得用senior colleagues更合适。
2）did well apply 不是很好。要么用did well in applying,要么直接说He applied accountance...用了aslo之后用强调语句显得有些别扭。
还有，ap...

internship是什么,拼错了- -
asking predecessors for advise好些吧...
did well in applying....
adheres-->adhered 过去
all given-->given all
leaves ->has left已经留下了好的印象
Modestly consults to others
个人观点,还请指教

1）much effort错，effort是可数的，你可以说many efforts

2)Respecting and getting along with others well, co-workers have all given their approval to the student who now leaves an excellent impression to ...

感觉翻译的有些问题，我自己翻译了一份，但不确定完全正确。
During his inter he worked with his passion. For the uncomprehending things, he never hesitated asking. He also integrate the accountancy theory with daily practice. A...

标准答案：
The main point is that he work hard, with an open mind to ask the accounting theory and practice a kind of clich
Help facie there is nothing wrong, thank you ~
Another: an open mind to ask how to say good point?

楼上很多达人都已给您许多好的建议，我就不再添乱了。只想强调两点：
Predecessor 在这绝对不能用；它一般是指‘前任’，顾名思义就是已经离任，不在公司了。您怎能向他请教呢？
虚心的意思不一定就是什么with open mind, 您也可以理解为 humble, modest…..
虚心请教：humbly seeking advice from….; consult m...

You did very good job. Actually much better than I do.

实习期间，他将大量的精力投入到工作中并且当他有问题时他毫不犹豫的请教前辈。他还很好的将会计理论应用到实践当中。与此同时，他坚持该公司的规则。尊重别人并且与其他人相处得很好，同事们都大家赞赏他，这个学生给公司留下了非常好的印象。
internship 实习医师的地位？？？你是想说实习吧?换个词
He also did well *apply accountancy theory in...

much effort-many efforts
predecessors-seniors 前辈用senior好些
did well apply -did well in applying...
accountancy theory-accounting theory 这是固定用法！
into-to
adheres-obey adheres 这词什么意思...

During his internship he worked very hard and never hesitated to ask for advices from predecessors if necessary. He also did well in applying accountancy theory to daily practice. Meanwhile, he strict...

he put much effort into his work and never hesitated seeking advice(向前辈讨教） from his predecessors.
predecessors是何意？前任的intern?如果是，可用previous intern on the same position/in the same assignment.也可保留此...