谁能帮我纠错我的英语日记.It is the first week this term.Time goes so qui
谁能帮我纠错我的英语日记.
It is the first week this term.Time goes so quickly that I can't catch it .It always make me helpless.
Today,we 14 people finished the comprehensive evaluation of the last term.I just got about 72 points which make I feel so sad.I was not a person who think highly of achievement in the past,and what make meget changed,the environment or I just want to change?
However I've changed,I'm also the girl you allknow.My heart has never changed.I would make great effort, and then I would become an excellent girl.
中文意思:这是这个学期的第一个星期.时间过的真是快,以致于我抓不住它.这总是让我感到很无助.
今天,我们14个人完成了上个学期的综合考评.我只得了大约72分,这让我感到很伤心.我以前并不是一个看重成就的人,是什么让我改变了,是环境还是我本来就想改变?
无论我变了多少,我也是你们所有人认识的那个女孩.我的心从来没有改变.我会努力,然后会变成一个优秀的女孩.
It is the first week this term.Time goes so quickly that I can't catch it .It always make me helpless.
Today,we 14 people finished the comprehensive evaluation of the last term.I just got about 72 points which make I feel so sad.I was not a person who think highly of achievement in the past,and what make meget changed,the environment or I just want to change?
However I've changed,I'm also the girl you allknow.My heart has never changed.I would make great effort, and then I would become an excellent girl.
中文意思:这是这个学期的第一个星期.时间过的真是快,以致于我抓不住它.这总是让我感到很无助.
今天,我们14个人完成了上个学期的综合考评.我只得了大约72分,这让我感到很伤心.我以前并不是一个看重成就的人,是什么让我改变了,是环境还是我本来就想改变?
无论我变了多少,我也是你们所有人认识的那个女孩.我的心从来没有改变.我会努力,然后会变成一个优秀的女孩.
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1.It always make me helpless.中的make--makes
2.evaluation of the last term中的 the去掉
3.I just got about 72 points which make I feel so sad
make-made更好,I必须改成me
4.I was not a person who think highly of achievement in the past,中think如果用一般现在时的话应该后面加-s
5.and what make meget changed,the environment or I just want to change我认为这样表达更好些
What made(过去时更好些)me change?Is it the environment that changed me?Or I want to change.
6.I would make great effort,and then I would become an excellent girl.中 would改成will好些
2.evaluation of the last term中的 the去掉
3.I just got about 72 points which make I feel so sad
make-made更好,I必须改成me
4.I was not a person who think highly of achievement in the past,中think如果用一般现在时的话应该后面加-s
5.and what make meget changed,the environment or I just want to change我认为这样表达更好些
What made(过去时更好些)me change?Is it the environment that changed me?Or I want to change.
6.I would make great effort,and then I would become an excellent girl.中 would改成will好些
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