英文自我介绍,帮忙指出错误I'm a chinese girl.I'm 13 years old.My birhday

嗯..
1、birhday改为birthday,拼写错误.
2、subejuct改为 subject,拼写错误.
3、with my friend 改为 with my friends 比较妥当,但是你说是固定的一个朋友那样说也行.
4、惊悚片是thriller不是thirller
5、 I can playing chess中的playing改play.情态动词后加动词原形.
6、然后,我觉得吧,My favorite subeject is P .E.与 I think it's fun之间加个because,这样因果关系更明确些,这个建议同样适用于下面.英语中文中,必要的连接词还是要有的,但是你如果觉得重复的话可以适用其他词,比如,表原因的词中你还可以适用 as,for 等.另外,个人觉得这篇文章中句式太单一,可以尝试多用几种句式,以及稍微将句子合并一下变得长一点.但是如果您是初学者的话,那可以慢慢联系,不必苛求.

I like thirller--------I like Thirller
Because I think they're exciting.____________________Because I think they're excited
They're boring.________because They're boring
I can playing chess_____I can play chess

subeject thirller 然后是I can play chess

首先birthday的拼写；其次，I like going to movies，movies已是复数，前不需加the特指；最后，I can play chess，can是情态动词，后面要加动词原形。

subeject 拼写错误 应为 subject
thirller拼写错误 应为thriller
I can playing chess改为 I can play chess
by the way, you are so cute with a taste of thriller. As a teenage girl,don't you be afraid of having nightmares?