麻烦大家帮我看下这篇短文改错（英语题）

麻烦大家帮我看下这篇短文改错（英语题）
Maxim Gorky,he lost father at five,
spends his childhood in his grandfather's home.
When he was 10,his mother died from illness.
His grandfather made him to look for a
job.For 10 years he did all what he
could.He lived such life not because he
was interesting but because he wanted to
see the great land,which he lived,and the people
around he.The life in those years
let him deep understand the old Russian society
这是一篇英语的短文改错..有一排应该是对行..其他每一排都有错....因为我对自己的答案不是太确定...