英语作文 If i were a millionaire

What would you do if you were a million-
aire? Many people would buy a house or
travel the world. As for me, I would start a
school. If I had a school, I would be able to
educate many children and teach them right
from wrong. Anyone will tell you that chil-
dren are a country's future. If my dream
comes true, I will be very happy because I
will be doing my country a good service.
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