I went to Beijing last summer holiday.There were lot of thing to see there.Such as The Great Wall(长城),Bird's Nest(鸟巢) ,Forbidden City (故宫)and so on(等等).I have a good time(玩得愉快) there. 暑假我去了北京.那里有很多东西看.例如长城,鸟巢,故宫等等.我在那玩的很开心. 行吗?
I went to Beijing last summer vacation.There were lot of thing to see there.Such as The Great Wall,Bird's Nest ,Forbidden City and so on.On the first day ,I went to Tian'an Men Sruare.It was crowded.So,I didn't really enjpy it.