我爱薄荷2
幼苗
共回答了21个问题采纳率:95.2% 举报
1.when it is comes 中去掉is
2.much to saying中的saying改成say
3.quarreled 改成quarrel
4.about if i could 中的if改成whether
5.strong 改成strongly
6.only when I try my best改成only when I had tried my best
7.be able to 改成can,另外把can放在I的前面
8.playing football not only.build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day.改成Not only do playing football build up my strength,but also make me full of energy every day.
9.some advices 改成some advice
10.allow me play 改成allow me to play
1年前
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