英语短文改错How are you?today I'd like tell you something about my

英语短文改错
How are you?today I'd like tell you something about myself.I have been decided to go to university in Beijing for further education.In about one and a half mouth,my classmates and I will take exams for it.However,my parents is not happy about it .They are strong against me after hearing my decision.They say it is too far that they will not see me for a long time and they are afraid of I will feel lonely in Beijing.They advise me to study in an university in Chongqing.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How can I persuade them to accept the fact which I have grown up?
I have decided to go to university in Beijing for further education 这句里应该还有个错误吧。
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prince0221 花朵

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How are you?today I'd like (插入to) tell you something about myself.
I have been (been 删除)decided to go to university in Beijing for further education.
In about one and a half month(month改为months),my classmates and I will take exams for it.
However,my parents is(is改为are) not happy about it .
They are strong(strong改为strongly) against me after hearing my decision.
They say it is too(too 改为 so) far that they will not see me for a long time and they are afraid of (of 改为 that)I will feel lonely in Beijing.
They advise me to study in an university in Chongqing.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.
How can I persuade them to accept the fact which(which 改为that) I have grown up?

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niwenun 幼苗

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1.I'd like tell you something about myself.→I'd like to tell you something about myself.
2.I have been decided to go to university in Beijing for further education.→I have decided to go to univers...

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bingdouhua 幼苗

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第二行应为month 不是mouth(嘴);第三行is not happy with it;They were strong……They said ;第五行are afraid of feeling lonely ;They advised;in an university of Chongqing;

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abc_wu 幼苗

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How are you? Today I'd like to tell you something about myself. I have decided to go to a university in Beijing for further education. In about one and a half months, my classmates and I will take exa...

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