请大家帮我看下下面的英语文段有没有错误(包括拼写错误,注意换行处,我没打连字符)

请大家帮我看下下面的英语文段有没有错误(包括拼写错误,注意换行处,我没打连字符)
My Friend
I have a new friend now.His name is Bill,He is a really handsome boy!Now let me tell you something about his life in a day.At 6:00,he gets up.It’s too early!But he has to do it,or he will be late for school.After breakfast,he goes to school quickly by bus at 6:40.His home is far away from the school so he often spends one hour on the bus.And then,he has 8 classes everyday from 8:00 am to 4:55 pm.He has lunch at noon at school.At 18:00,he gets home.After supper,he does his homework from 19:00 to 21:00.Then he takes a shower.After that,he goes to bed.He thinks his life is busy but interesting!
zebralibra9 1年前 已收到1个回答 举报

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没的语法错误.不错.

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