英语改错.It was raining when I was in my way home yesterday.Sudd

英语改错.
It was raining when I was in my way home yesterday.Sudden I was an old woman moving forward with a stick in his hand.She hadn't got the umbrella and is wet all over.Then I decided sharing my umbrella with her.But the old woman is tall and I am too short to hold it hingh enough.Then it was a good idea came to me.I tied to the woman's stick to the handle of my umbrellas.Then it was long enough both of us.The old woman thanked me,and I felt pleasing with what I had done.
以上有十处错误.
我的意思是有10处错误，saw、high是打错。