英语翻译写英语论文要用的,请帮忙把下面的句子翻成中文,随着包装业的迅速发展,包装对环境的影响越来越突出.本文通过分析现代

With the rapid development of packaging industry,the effect that packages have on the environment is becoming more and more crucial.In this thesis(研究生.博士论文）/essay(其余的）,by analysing several packaging problems that exist in the modern commodities,I will specially point out the environmental problems caused by the packaging problem and how we solve theses environmental problems by developing "Green Packages".
说实话,我觉得您的中文原文中“问题”两个字太多了.译成英文,有点指代不明.比如,我觉得最后一个“问题”改成“现象”会比较好.
所以,建议您再自己改改.

With the rapid development of packing industry,its affects environment more and more seriously.This thesis analyses few issues of modern packing industry,especially indicating the problems for enviroment brought by packing and how we will solve this problem by developing green packing industry.

with the rapid development of the packaging industry, the influence of the packaging becomes more and more serious. this thesis analyses the problems existing in modern packaging industry, especially...